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From: WillyJL <49810075+Willy-JL@users.noreply.github.com>
Date: Fri, 2 Feb 2024 05:13:17 +0000
Subject: [PATCH] Update ReadMe.md

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   <a href="https://flipper-xtre.me">Website</a> | <a href="https://github.com/Flipper-XFW/Xtreme-Firmware#What-makes-it-special">Intro</a> | <a href="https://github.com/Flipper-XFW/Xtreme-Firmware#Install">Install</a> | <a href="https://github.com/Flipper-XFW/Xtreme-Firmware#list-of-changes">Changelog</a> | <a href="https://github.com/Flipper-XFW/Xtreme-Firmware/wiki">Wiki</a> | <a href="https://discord.gg/flipper-xtreme">Discord</a> | <a href="https://github.com/Flipper-XFW/Xtreme-Firmware#%EF%B8%8F-support">Donate</a>
 </h2>
 
-This firmware is a complete overhaul of the [Official Firmware](https://github.com/flipperdevices/flipperzero-firmware), and also features lots of awesome code-bits from [Unleashed](https://github.com/DarkFlippers/unleashed-firmware).
+This firmware is an extensive overhaul of the [Official Firmware](https://github.com/flipperdevices/flipperzero-firmware), and also features most of the awesome code-bits from [Unleashed](https://github.com/DarkFlippers/unleashed-firmware).
 
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@@ -16,21 +16,21 @@ This firmware is a complete overhaul of the [Official Firmware](https://github.c
 
 We have spent many hours perfecting this code even further, and getting the most out of it.
 
-The goal of this Firmware is to regularly bring out amazing updates based on what the community wants, with an actual understanding of whats going on. Fixing bugs that are regularly talked about, removing unstable / broken applications (.FAP) and actually using the level system that just sits abandoned everywhere else.
+The goal of this Firmware is to regularly bring out amazing updates based on what the community wants, with an actual understanding of whats going on. Fixing bugs that are regularly talked about, broadening the capabilities of the Flipper with new exciting functionality, and most importantly, ensuring the easiest user experience possible.
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 - <h4>Feature-rich: We include all commonly found apps in the firmware, as long as they work.</h4>
 
-- <h4>Stable: Many hours have been spent rewriting core parts of the Flippers firmware as well as some of its apps to ensure stability. A task that was long needed on all Firmware, so we tackled it right away.</h4>
+- <h4>Stable: Many hours have been spent rewriting core parts of the Flipper's firmware as well as some of its apps to ensure stability. A task that was long needed on all Firmware, so we tackled it right away.</h4>
 
 - <h4>Customizable: Dont like the Animations, want to turn on/off the Home screen icons (battery, SD card etc), change the flippers name or anything like that? You absolutely can. No need to mess with code or deal with weird manifest files. Its all done with an App.</h4>
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-Note, the below mentioned changes are only a few things we did. For a full list click [here](https://github.com/Flipper-XFW/Xtreme-Firmware/wiki/Customization)
+Note, the below mentioned changes are only a few things we did. For a full list click [here](https://github.com/Flipper-XFW/Xtreme-Firmware#Changes)
 
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 <h2 align="center">Xtreme Settings:</h2>
 
-We wrote a powerful yet easy-to-use application specifically for our Firmware, that gives you easy-access to all the fancy things we implemented:
+We wrote a powerful yet easy-to-use application specifically for our Firmware, that gives you easy-access to most of the fancy things we implemented:
 
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@@ -44,7 +44,7 @@ Also, perhaps a bigger height, with set width (yes distrotion issues ik) so it f
 
 - <ins><b>Interface:</b></ins> Customize every bit of your Flipper, from the desktop animations, to the main menu apps, lockscreen style etc.
 
-- <ins><b>Protocols:</b></ins> Here you can toggle between USB & Bluetooth mode for <a href="https://github.com/Flipper-XFW/Xtreme-Firmware/wiki/Generic-Guides#badbt--kb">BadKB</a>, and manage custom Subghz frequencies.
+- <ins><b>Protocols:</b></ins> Here you can configure <a href="https://github.com/Flipper-XFW/Xtreme-Firmware/wiki/Generic-Guides#badbt--kb">BadKB</a>, manage custom Subghz frequencies, and setup the GPIO pins mappings.
 
 - <ins><b>Misc:</b></ins> All the other options that don't fit elsewhere. Change your Flipper's name, xp level, and configure the <a href="https://github.com/Z3BRO/Flipper-Zero-RGB-Backlight">RGB backlight</a>.
 
@@ -57,10 +57,10 @@ Also, perhaps a bigger height, with set width (yes distrotion issues ik) so it f
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 </h2>
 
-We created our own, new & improved Animation / Asset system, that we can finally reveal. It lets you to create and cycle through your own `Asset Packs` with only a few button presses, allowing you to easily load custom Animations and Icons like never before.
+We created our own improved Animation / Asset system that lets you create and cycle through your own `Asset Packs` with only a few button presses, allowing you to easily load custom Animations, Icons and Fonts like never before.
 
 <img src="https://user-images.githubusercontent.com/55334727/214010675-9eddb8f5-1dd6-4cf4-a0ee-e37af8b6c933.PNG" align="left" width="200px"/>
-You can easily create your own pack, or find some user made ones in the discord channel. Check <a href="https://github.com/Flipper-XFW/Xtreme-Firmware/wiki/Asset-Packs">here</a> for a tutorial on creating your own. Essentially, we got our own <code>Anims</code> & <code>Icons</code> folders, inside each <code>Asset Pack</code>.
+You can easily create your own pack, or find some user made ones on our website or on discord. Check <a href="https://github.com/Flipper-XFW/Xtreme-Firmware/wiki/Asset-Packs">here</a> for a tutorial on creating your own. Essentially, each <code>Asset Pack</code> can configure its own <code>Anims</code>, <code>Icons</code> & <code>Fonts</code>.
 
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@@ -75,7 +75,7 @@ Once you have some packs, upload them to your Flipper in <code>SD/asset_packs</c
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 <img src="https://user-images.githubusercontent.com/55334727/214013624-25dad48e-72ea-4a90-9060-66e137e0d61a.png" align="left" width="200px"/>
-After installing the packs to Flipper, hit the <code>Arrow UP</code> button on the main menu and go to <code>Xtreme Settings</code>. Here choose which pack you want and tweak the other settings how you prefer, then press back to reboot and enjoy your new assets for all apps (e.g. Subghz scanning asset) & animations!
+After installing the packs to Flipper, hit the <code>Arrow UP</code> button on the main menu and go to <code>Xtreme Settings</code>. Here choose which pack you want and tweak the other settings how you prefer, then press back to reboot and enjoy your newly fully customized Flipper!
 
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@@ -176,7 +176,7 @@ There are 3 methods to install Xtreme, we recommend you use the **Web Updater**,
 > <details><summary><code>Zipped Archive (.zip)</code></summary><ul>
 >   <li>Download the zipped archive (.zip) from the <a href="https://github.com/Flipper-XFW/Xtreme-Firmware/releases/latest">latest release page</a></li>
 >   <li>Extract the archive. This is now your new Firmware folder</li>
->   <li>Open <a href="https://flipperzero.one/update">qFlipper</a>, head to <code>SD/Update</code> and simply move the firmware folder there</li>
+>   <li>Open <a href="https://flipperzero.one/update">qFlipper</a>, head to <code>SD/update</code> and simply move the firmware folder there</li>
 >   <li>On the Flipper, hit the <code>Arrow Down</code> button, this will get you to the file menu. In there simply search for your updates folder</li>
 >   <li>Inside that folder, select the Firmware you just moved onto it, and run the file thats simply called <code>Update</code></li>
 > </ul></details>
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 $ ./fbt updater_package
 
 To build and launch a single app:
-$ ./fbt launch APPSRC=some_appid
+$ ./fbt launch APPSRC=your_appid
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